My CaReLeSs WhIsPeR-Think UNIT TRUST, Think Agnes

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(C) 2004 Hak Cipta Terpelihara
Author : Agnes Loh
Duration of Completion : Approximately 2 hours
Date : 8-9 Oct 2004


Composed this last night after the Malaysian Idol Finale. Suddenly had the urge to produce a BM puisi. FYI, this is my very very first poem written in BM hehehe :) And this is also the 2nd one posted and published on this site. Link to the 1st one back in the August Archive(http://cutie_rocker83.blogspot.com/2004/08/poem-survived.html)

Ur gd fren : All in 2 hours? Wow you're amazing! Not surprising though, reminds me of how you always got praised 4 your mastering of the language by your BM teachers back in sec school. If you write a poem for me, I'll feel so honoured hehe :P  

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wow!! i'm so touched!!! hehe... actually i think it's pretty good... this poem is filled with emotions and hidden meanings... . hmmm.... i must learn from you your poetry skills.... can i call you my "sifu"... nah just kidding.... i was almost brought to tears by this man.. you better buy me a drink when we meet.. cozzz i'm usually not this emotional.... hehee just kidding..one advice.... hmmm maybe you should write more poems.... so that you can unleash your hidden poetry talents... don't let it be a waste...like the stupid malaysian idol malay judge, whatever his name is... nazri or something always said... agnes... you are a super duper poet!!!  

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Touched and almost brought to tears? Oh WOW,never thought that's the respond I'm getting man. I thought the poem is not impressing or good enuf coz some frens, after they read it, no comments given at all.So sad hehe :P

I have a few more poems in my poem book actually hehehe..but not gonna publish here coz those aren't that fresh anymore. Super-dooper poet? Itu Roslan Aziz lar. THANK YOU SO MUCH,my fren!!!  

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hmmm....i dun really appreciate puisi melayu though....reminds me of all the crappy puisi melayu i have 2 interpret during SPM time.....hahahah.... :p
write some english 1 la agnes....:D  

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Who r u anyway?
Wat lar,mines is not as deep and as abstract as those classic kind ok~
Btw,I did post one english one here also wat,SURVIVED?? Got the shorcut link in this post also...  

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wah....u still in touch with ur bm..... good man..
haha... unlike me
cool poem
:)

Xian  

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